Title: Team Bluemoon & Redsun
Description: A pokemon mystery dungeon fan fic
abra24 - February 6, 2007 09:09 PM (GMT)
NOTE:This Story has many characters. Here are genders:Link:Girl/George:Boy/
Jerry:Boy/Joe:Boy
THESE ARE MY REAL TEAMS!!!
Link, the eevee woke up one day. He walked outside the Team Bluemoon base to find his partner, George the mudkip, waiting for him. "Hey Link! Let's go see Team Redsun!" They walked down the road and saw a Base. They walked inside and saw Jerry, a squirtle who was also the leader and his partner, Joe the bulbasaur.
Jerry ran over to Link and said (in love) " Hi Link! Your looking great today!"
"Um, yeah thanks Jerry." Link said, Emberessed. "So he's still at it." George said to Joe."Yep." Link and George Really liked Jerry and Joe but Jerry liked Link TOO much. The 2 teams went to see firemist's team. (I don't know what it's called) Link saw the eevee from firemist's team. They were big rivals. "Hey you took my trophie!"Said Link "No I didn't!" "Yes you did!" After a few hours of arguing, Link said, "Let's go!" "Then go!" Said firemist's eevee.
*Three Hours Later*
"Hey Jerry I think you and me should see Whiscash."
*After a few hours with Whiscash*
"Hey Link do you want to sleep in our base? We could get George to sleep in The extra part of the base with Joe!" Said Jerry. "Sure!" Said Link. They all went to bed. The next morning, A Mewtwo came into town. Link's team, Jerry's team and firemist's team went up to him and said "Why are you here?" "I HAVE COME TO SEE AN EEVEE NAMED LINK." He said. "I'm Link" said Link, softly. "I WANT TO SAY, YOU ARE VERY POWERFUL. I WANT YOU TO JOIN MY RESCUE TEAM." Link said, "No. I have my own rescue team." "I SAID JOIN." "No!" "THEN PERISH!!!"
*20 Years later*
"Hi Whiscash! My mama and papa died a few years ago." "How?" " They battled mewtwo but it killed them." " What were there names?" " Link and George." "Ah, Link was a very good warior. Just to make you feel better, they saved the world with the help of Jerry and Joe." "Really?" "Really!" "Wow! What was some more great things they did?" "Well, it all started when Link walked out of the team base and saw George..."
THE END
Alma Altars - February 7, 2007 01:53 PM (GMT)
Cool story. It was a little hard to understand with all of the different characters, but overall, I liked it!
abra24 - February 7, 2007 02:02 PM (GMT)
Thanks! I made a small change so you might want to read again.
OK now Link is an eevee and the main character and George is a mudkip who grows to be Links husband and is always her partner. They are on my Blue rescue team. Jerry is a squirtle who, in the story, is in love with Link when it is little but when it grows it changes it's mind.Read more to find out more info. Joe is a bulbasaur And also Jerry's partner. They are in my red rescue team. and at the end, the people who helped save the world was George Jerry Joe and firemist's eevee.
Alma Altars - February 7, 2007 02:07 PM (GMT)
That's a lot better! I was wondering why mew would have killed them, and now it makes more sense. Good job!
abra24 - February 7, 2007 02:42 PM (GMT)
PART 2!!! By the way, the kid talking to whiscash was an eevee named Kevin.(He is Link's son)
One Day, Kevin came out of the Base of ol' team Bluemoon. HONK! HONK!
"What was that!" screamed Kevin. "It is Profeser alakazam. He came to do an important deed. said whiscash. SPLASH! SPLASH! "WHAT IS UP WITH ALL THIS NOISE!!!" Screamed Kevin. "That was just Simeon, The Swampert. He came in town a few hours ago, while you were sleeping." Said whiscash. "His team Mudsparks is amazing. Known to be better than team alakazam." "WOW!!!" Said Kevin, "Better than alakazam." "Is the machine ready?" Said prof. alakazam. "Yep." Said whiscash. "The deed will be done soon." Said the profeser.
Team Mudsparks ran through the path and into the square. "Stay There Scar!" Said Simeon as he ran. "WHY IS EVERYONE SO ACTIVE!!!" Said Kevin at the top of his lungs. Meanwhile, Prof. alakazam and Team Mudsparks were in a lab. "We're ready." Said sparks. "Alright." said the profeser."We'll do it now." They pulled a swich. Light flashed. Everything was bright. And out of the machine came Link, George, Jerry and Joe. "YES!!!" Said profeser alakazam. "It worked!"
END OF PART 2 SPECIAL THANKS TO ALMA ALTARS
Alma Altars - February 7, 2007 02:46 PM (GMT)
Sweet! Nice move bringing back Link and the rest!
abra24 - February 7, 2007 02:58 PM (GMT)
Thanks! I'm trying to find out firemist's partner.
I can't double post. Will someone post so I can make the next chapter?!?!
lopfot - February 8, 2007 12:37 AM (GMT)
These are kinda good.
(common courtesy post)
abra24 - February 8, 2007 12:16 PM (GMT)
Alright. I'll try to make it better and funnier. And spell better :crazy:
I'm still trying to get firemist's partner. FIREMIST WHERE ARE YOU?!?!
Hey lopfot? Do you have a team I can use? I really need another team for the next chap.
True_Chaos - February 8, 2007 01:03 PM (GMT)
you can use my teams, if you want to that is. my two teams are *ahem* Team
Lightstar (PMD:BRT) and Zippo (PMD:RRT)
Here are the team members (these are real):
Lightstar:
Talos (Swampert: Male): LV: 100 (i sneakily used my Action replay for Christmas. Haaa)
Kai (Typhlosion: Male): LV: 100
PsyRoBo2 (Porygon2 ???): LV: 100
Rank: Lucario (AR for this too.)
Zippo:
Ricky (Pikachu: Male): LV:6 (i don't have AR for Gameboy Advance)
Cruncher (Totodile: Male): LV:5
Rank: Normal
Description for my teams: Lightstar and Zippo are friend teams. Talos and Kai are like tutors to team Zippo. Everyday they try to teach Ricky and Cruncher how to do cool tricks.
Like I said at the start, you can use them if you want to. im not forcing you to use them (i know, i sound a bit like a cheater with Action Replay DS at hand. I'll admit it, I AM. x_x :XD: )
abra24 - February 8, 2007 01:56 PM (GMT)
"Mom! Dad!" Said Kevin. "Calm down!" Commanded Link. "I have decided,"Said alakazam."To rejoin my team with Tyranatar and Charizard. If your team needs training, Mine will help." "Mine needs help. Me, a pikachu and totodile. I'm ricky and this is cruncher." "Yeah! We do need training! We're Team Zippo!" "OK, We'll help train them." said a Swampert. "Me and Kai the typhloshin and PsyRoBo2 the porygon2." "I'm the leader, Talos." Said the swampert. "We usualy train team zippo back at home." "And Jerry, Joe, George and I will help make a new base for them!" "Yeah!" Said Jerry. All of a sudden a beautiful Staru came over to the crowd. "Hello!" Said the Staru. "I'm Crystal. Hello Mr.Squirtle! What's your name?" "Jerry." He said "Your beutiful! Do you want to join the team?" Said Jerry.
"Sorry. I'm the leader of a new rescue team. Team Sprayers." Said Crystal.
Link said, "Well it looks like he found himself a new girlfriend." The crowd went to the team Zippo base and everyone got to work. They were all busy, except Kevin and Link. "Kevin, I want you to help with the team Zippo base." Said Link. "Alright." Said Kevin. They were all now working, and Jerry was... DATING?!?!
lopfot - February 8, 2007 11:18 PM (GMT)
Yep I do.
Team ""Team
Charmandol the Pikachu level 14
Slammobo the Mudkip level 13
abra24 - February 9, 2007 12:02 AM (GMT)
| QUOTE (lopfot @ Feb 8 2007, 06:18 PM) |
Yep I do.
Team ""Team Charmandol the Pikachu level 14 Slammobo the Mudkip level 13 |
Alright. I'll use it in the next Chap.
Slim Davy - February 11, 2007 04:09 AM (GMT)
Nice story!*Jumps up and down*
Please write/type more!
abra24 - February 11, 2007 01:45 PM (GMT)
| QUOTE (lopfot @ Feb 8 2007, 06:18 PM) |
Yep I do.
Team ""Team Charmandol the Pikachu level 14 Slammobo the Mudkip level 13 |
What's the team name? Is it "" ? Also, I have decicided to stop my story at one more chapter, due to reseting a game. The next chapter has a new character.
Read to find out who!
lopfot - February 15, 2007 02:17 AM (GMT)
abra24 - February 15, 2007 12:44 PM (GMT)
Info on next chapter:
New teams: Team "Team" Charmandol the charmader and Slammobo the pikachu.
Newest characters: Tyrannatar and Charizard who are on team Alakazam.
Newest place: The Ralts emotion tester
Read more to find out what the "so called last chapter" Is about!
OK, I have decided to remove team redsun and leave team bluemoon. I will continue the story if I get 1 more rating on the chapters, I will continue my story.
By the way, I will not stop my storys with the nhext chapter.