The Tremendous Adventure
Chapter One: Mastering the Art of Ice
By Roel Ibanez



Once upon a time a white 4 feet wolf named Jake was about to go on an adventure with 3 of his friends to save the world from darkness. One was a blue 6 inch and 4 feet wolf named Raven and another one was a black 5 feet wolf named silky and the last one was a red 11 inch and 3 feet wolf named Matt. Jake was the leader.
Before they left Jake said they can bring there own pet to help attack monsters in the forest and other places. Jake brang his pet dog who's special ability was biting. Raven brang her pet raven(a bird)who's special ability is scratching with its claws. Silky brang her pet spider who's special ability was traping things in its web. Last, Matt brought his pet slug whos special ability was to distract the enemy by going slow so Matt can Attack it.
They had everything packed Ryo(money), tents, and plenty of food.


i have sumbmited part of this story i need to work on the rest