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Title: Pichu
Description: Poem


Treecko - November 25, 2006 10:12 PM (GMT)
[b]Pichu
Pichu, oh Pichu :pichu:
yellow and bright! :pichu:
When you shock with your cheeks, you faint in great fright! :pichu:
What a cute baby mouse Pokemon :pichu:
that runs all and about :pichu:
Pichu, oh Pichu :pichu:
You're cute, no doubt! :pichu:
By: :treecko:
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Please, no mean/rude comments/remarks.
Thank you.

iwimo - January 8, 2007 02:29 PM (GMT)
That poem's not bad, but you could work on it a bit, out of 10 its.. wait for it...

EIGHT POINT FIVE OUT OF TEN! ^_^

abra24 - January 22, 2007 12:47 AM (GMT)
I give it 9.9/10 It was very good but why'd you put a sceptile in it? Your username is treeco not sceptile and the poem was about a pichu. But it was very good! Don't give up! :banana:




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