title: god made our world(If only)

verse 1
If only the world could be what I wanted but...
I don't rule it
there would be ice cream candy skies
and roads full of money
so people wouldn't be poor
grass tall as giants
to have lot of adventures
and the point of life would be weavile rule
but...

the...
the sky is blue...
the grass is green...
the road is black...
and the point of life is fourty-two...
and that's the way god made it.

verse 2
If only pokemon were real...
and I could battle people
if only they weren't just in a show
and in the games
and if only they were real
but...

life has us...
people boys and girls...
animals not pokemon...
living together in our world...
and thats the way god made it.

verse 3
If only we had super powers...
like on shows and movies
and our games
I'd be soring flying controling reallity
if only we did
but...

we are people...
birds can fly...
god controls reality...
and people have powers on shows and games...

conclution
god made us like this...and he made our world...how come some people don't take care...he made it for us...
take care of it with glee...he made it for me.

how do you like it?

where did you come up with that? :o 10/10 perfect plus way to true

I thought poems were supposed to ryhme... Well I liked it..

Free Verse is poetry. Heck. Some days in school people call my speech poetry.

Yes, not all poems have to rhyme.
It looks like you worked very hard on this poem. Good job. (:

Yeah, you definitely put a lot of thought into this. And I tend to prefer free verse over rhyming because sometimes the rhyming gets a bit annoying.

Rhyming= nonsense
non rhyming= good

Anyways that is great. A lot of thought. But you forgot the bit about learning from doing, in that really tall grass. No school, you teach yourself what you need to learn!